Students reflect and analyze their writing

At the end of the year, students are given a writing post assessment to show growth. This post assessment is a personal narrative and was the very first unit we taught. Therefore, we have chosen to do a mini review and have students practice writing in that genre one more time before they have to complete the assessment. 

After talking to my literacy coach and the other teachers on my team, we wanted our students to really own the process and the important components that make a personal narrative. Therefore, we used the rubric that their piece will be graded on and had students analyze their piece. This rubric was a kid friendly rubric with "I can" statements. 

The mini lessons for these three days didn't include anything new which made it extremely student directed. We used previously made anchor charts to pull the important parts into the rubric. At the beginning of the mini lesson, I introduced the rubric to the students. They then helped me craft examples of the components by using anchor charts. I then modeled how to use the rubric to analyze your piece by using a piece I had created. I used marker to underline each component so that I could prove and recognize that I actually had a lead, an ending, dialogue, etc. Students were extremely engaged and then couldn't wait to go analyze their own piece. Students also reflected on their writing by noticing what they do all of the time and what they need to add more of. As a class, we noticed that we were rockstars at having ellipses, but needed to work on having transition words in our pieces. 

After reflecting on this process, the best part was that students were actually naming the components of a personal narrative piece. Those who noticed the components that were missing were able to add them in by using marker. The marker stood out to prove that writers re-read and check their work and then add more to the words, if needed. I had one student realize that their piece was covered with marker. As I like to say, THAT WAS A PERFECT LEARNING MOMENT and a time for conversation! I mentioned that if you have included ALL parts of a personal narrative, then your piece should be full of color. The color would be your evidence as to how you included structure, development, and conventions within your piece. 

Here are the examples of our anchor charts that we created with the rubric. On Monday, we will reflect on the entire process and set a personal goal for writing narratives.